- A Blue Angel Comment: I
love the line- 'A friend, yes am I to her from afar', I know how that feels!
Lovely use of language and some flourishes of internal rhyme. Superb. - Daniel Tyler
- Poetry...? Comment: Nice!
There is one word usage I'm not familiar with...'chimerical'. 'It's a 'chemical
avenue of pain and joy'? I don't know. However, 'Poetry...? ' is good. - Lawrence S. Pertillar
- Man, I'm Asking Why? Comment: This
is an intriguing piece of work you have written. Why is always a question,
isn't it? It seems never to be answered AND
if it was then how would one respond? There is no period (dot) to satisfy that
curiousity that will always bring us back to wonder...why? And THEN for whay
reason? 'Man, I'm Asking Why? '...Not? - Lawrence S. Pertillar
- Eyemoon Comment: This
amazing and mystical...I love it! ! It's now on my Favourites list . Thank you for sharing. Best wishes! - Sally Clarke